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People don't want me to be me,
so they force me to be the person they want to see.
they don't see that their effect was reversed
or that my breaking point has been traversed.

I feel as though my mind is slowly being erraticated
and my once strong body painfully mutilated.
because of my affiliations,
i have suffered through many tribulations.

I want to just lay down and die
and let my soul drift towards the sky.
but i know it's not my time quite yet,
for i still have goals that need to be met.

So until i finish my final task,
a little peace is all i ask.
i do not wish to cause any strife,
i just want you to get out of MY LIFE!!!
life
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RoseOfStardust Featured By Owner May 11, 2011
I want to just lay down and die
and let my soul drift towards the sky.
But i know it's not my time quite yet,
for i still have goals that need to be met.

Is a lyric/songtext of Draconian =D
Beautyful ^^
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maplestriker Featured By Owner May 13, 2011
oh, wow... i was unaware of that.
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RoseOfStardust Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
Sure...
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maplestriker Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
-blink- hmm?
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Br3nDaN13 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
I like it!! I can relate to it a lot!
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renesmeecullenlov Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
i lov it
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SapphireTheLovely Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
wonderfull. this is amazing
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Darcknysse Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2009
You are expressing your feelings towards your life. That's deep.
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pictureUNperfect Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009   Photographer
WOW!! i know exactly what you mean i feel the same way most of the time!
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evanescencexloverx25 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful i love it but how about u let me stay in ur life 4 awhile?
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Imie Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2006
:hug: nice, i can relate to that
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dragon-blade14 Featured By Owner May 20, 2006   Traditional Artist
Love your delivery, quick to the point and sufficent detail to impact someone. I like this very much, good job! Though, happiness is the right emotion for this, perhaps annoyance, and a little hatred, but ^^ either way, your poems are very good. I think I'll watch you...if I can even say that without it sounding creepy XD +devwatch
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dragon-blade14 Featured By Owner May 20, 2006   Traditional Artist
Love your delivery, quick to the point and sufficent detail to impact someone. I like this very much, good job! Though, happiness is the right emotion for this, perhaps annoyance, and a little hatred, but ^^ either way, your poems are very good. I think I'll watch you...if I can even say that without it sounding creepy XD +devwatch
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Helix-of-Wind Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2006   Photographer
that is really well written, and well portrayed. good job.
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chibiansem02 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2006
awesomeness
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kylie123 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2006   Writer
this is really good.
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