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People don't want me to be me,
so they force me to be the person they want to see.
they don't see that their effect was reversed
or that my breaking point has been traversed.

I feel as though my mind is slowly being erraticated
and my once strong body painfully mutilated.
because of my affiliations,
i have suffered through many tribulations.

I want to just lay down and die
and let my soul drift towards the sky.
but i know it's not my time quite yet,
for i still have goals that need to be met.

So until i finish my final task,
a little peace is all i ask.
i do not wish to cause any strife,
i just want you to get out of MY LIFE!!!
life
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:iconroseofstardust:
I want to just lay down and die
and let my soul drift towards the sky.
But i know it's not my time quite yet,
for i still have goals that need to be met.

Is a lyric/songtext of Draconian =D
Beautyful ^^
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:iconmaplestriker:
oh, wow... i was unaware of that.
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:iconbr3ndan13:
I like it!! I can relate to it a lot!
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SapphireTheLovely Feb 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
wonderfull. this is amazing
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:icondarcknysse:
You are expressing your feelings towards your life. That's deep.
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pictureUNperfect Jan 19, 2009   Photographer
WOW!! i know exactly what you mean i feel the same way most of the time!
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evanescencexloverx25 Aug 23, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful i love it but how about u let me stay in ur life 4 awhile?
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